Draft Edit - Abandoned Thriller

  

Today, my groups draft edit of our thriller was completed and put up onto YouTube.

Our Thriller is set in an abandoned location. There are three people, all of which are teenagers who have been out for the day and come across the location our thriller was filmed in. The location was in a large forest like field with an old abandoned metal framed building.

The thriller starts of with a mystery person walking down an old looking path. This mystery person is breathing heavily and gives the audience the impression that they are scared.
The next scene is the teenagers coming across the building and looking confused.

The teenagers then decide to explore the building and see what is around, little did they know what the building holds for them...
As the opening sequence continues we find out that two of the teenagers go missing; we don't know how they disappear, all we know is that they have gone.

The teenager that is left is now on her own, what does she do?
She is left with the mystery noises.

The last teenager is left scared, hears a noise and runs, runs for her life to get away from the building and she doesn't want to be the next one to disappear.
The title sequence then appears as the opening sequence is over. The title links to the title of the thriller as it is called 'Abandoned' and the letters disappear too.

This is our draft edit as there is no production company, the dialogue isn't very clear or very loud and the last bit of the opening sequence (the swinging door) needs to be extended with the backing track extended and made louder.
These will be changed ready for the final edit.